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DANGER: RADIATION THREAT | MAJOR NOTE: THIS IS AN ALTERED VERSION OF RADIATION THAT CAN AND WILL AFFECT SOULS THANKS TO SOME SPECIAL MODIFICATION FROM KJ YUNASHI! SO THIS ISN'T NORMAL RADIATION! UPDATE: YOU CAN NOW PROCEED IN THIS THREAD WITH CAUTION TO SEE THE DAMAGE THESE TWO CAUSED! I REPEAT, ENTER THIS THREAD WITH CAUTION! In The Thread, "Clash of Titants", there is currently a major threat of Radiation spreading throughout some of the Seireitei due to the on-going spar with 0 Division Member, Ceon Clixx, and Former Vice Captain of Kenpachi Zaraki and Biological Experimentation of KJ: Radioactive. There is also a major Category 5 Hurricane to be worried about as well forming from Ceon Clixx. During the battle Radioactive used an attack he hadn't used in awhile. To sum it all up, it's basically a miniature nuclear explosion going on within the Gotei 13's boundaries. It should also be noted Radioactive was used as a walking, breathing, fighting nuclear weapon during the war against the Quincies thanks to the mad scienteist, KJ Yunashi. Thanks to the modifications to his body he was able to help in the extermination of Quincies with the Gotei 13. Will anyone be able stop these two from destroying everything for the sake of fun or will they eventually finish each other off? For now, if your not at least on 0 tier, it's better to stand back and watch this battle from afar. Anyone under 0 tier will be more prone to die if they enter this battlefield. So you've been warned. |
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Sirchriswill
Posts : 1 Join date : 2010-04-18 Age : 32 Location : Texas
| Subject: my avatar Sun Apr 18, 2010 1:50 am | |
| SHINIGAMI Name: Ryohei Kutsuu Gender: Male Age:24 but looks 19 Personality:outgoing yet not amused by much Appearance: height 6'4 slim creepy grin at all times has a long scar slashed across his face ZanpakutÃŽ Spirit: my zanpakuto name is zenshu he doesn take shit from anyone and looks like me just is in the form of a shadow Sealed ZanpakutÃŽ : (released?) my zanpakuto sealed is slim and has spikes running along the bottom edges with flames running down the handle Shikai Description: my sword shikai form makes it become longer as the spikes disappear as it would become wider by frame of the handle would turn into a chain and wrap around my arm Shikai Abilities: my shikai has the ability to extend itself stretching to extreme lengths as i control it by brute force Release: Send into oblivion OBLITERATE! Bankai Description: my bankai forms enables the form of having 1 black wing in the form of a shadow on my bk as my eyes would turn cold black Bankai Abilities: i then have the power of immense speed slashing all in my path without even being thought of moving History/Background: ryohei once had his own family but it all changed when his family was killed he took revenge but ended up dying in process afterwards he remembers nothing of his former life just darkness Roleplay Sample: as i would slowl unsheath my zanpakuto i would grin glithcing behind my opponent quickly slashing his bk while grabbing his neck and sliding my sword through his bk as it would hit the ground as his lifeless body reached the handle as it stuck into the ground | |
| | | Nina
Posts : 20 Join date : 2010-04-17 Location : Your gonna stalk me...
| Subject: Re: my avatar Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:04 pm | |
| Please add description to your personality. Personality is a very important thing during rps as it shows what kind of individual your character is, I'd recommend to at least have a paragraph of personality. Appearance needs work as well, write out how your character looks as if you've shown us a picture. Your Zanpakutou spirit needs work, they are like people too having their own unique appearances and their own unique personalities. Your Sealed and Shikai appearance needs more description.
Your shikai ability... you can stretch it? By pure force? I don't think thats possible in any way. Please give a different explanation as how your shikai stretches. You need more description on Bankai appearance and abilities. Your history needs to be way longer... it is the life of your character, who they are today how they're personalities were created I would recommend having several paragraphs here. Your role play sample needs more description and needs to be in 3rd person. Also you have god modded in your rp sample...
What people generally look into rp sample is how you write with your character. Its preferred that a rp sample is not about fighting but about the daily life of the character while battle rp samples usually tells us nothing about how you rp with your character. Please fix these problems. | |
| | | Tsubine La Chavalier de Loi
Posts : 305 Join date : 2010-03-14 Age : 33 Location : Exavil
| Subject: Re: my avatar Mon Apr 19, 2010 1:06 am | |
| Also appearance. It needs to be a picture and a few sentences OR a paragraph or two. | |
| | | Nina
Posts : 20 Join date : 2010-04-17 Location : Your gonna stalk me...
| Subject: Re: my avatar Mon Apr 19, 2010 1:13 am | |
| Already said that | |
| | | Tsubine La Chavalier de Loi
Posts : 305 Join date : 2010-03-14 Age : 33 Location : Exavil
| Subject: Re: my avatar Mon Apr 19, 2010 1:15 am | |
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| | | Nina
Posts : 20 Join date : 2010-04-17 Location : Your gonna stalk me...
| Subject: Re: my avatar Mon Apr 19, 2010 7:33 pm | |
| Also I forgot to mention about this but please make your real age in the hundreds as there is no shinigami under that age especially shinigami with Bankai as it takes a very long time to master shikai by itself and bankai. | |
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