A time for special Training

Janitor Posts : 104 Join date : 2010-03-17

It's a clear day, sun shining, a nice wind blowing, and birds chirping loudly. In
the forest near a mountain is a strange man walking. He is drinking a cup of tea while holding a zanpakutou in his hand. He throws the cup away and grunts, then he went out into a sprint towards the mountain side. As he got closer he took a giant leap in there air. He got almost 13 feet and landed on a piece of land sticking out of the mountain. The land was big enough to build a house on and had grass and three trees.
He sat down in the tree looking outwards among the forest. The wind was blowing a little harder but not so much to annoy you. He laid down on the branch slowly and fell asleep. The branch had been long and almost as wide as him, good enough to sleep on. As he was asleep the nice day went on with it's peaceful mood.

Admin Posts : 59 Join date : 2010-03-14

(Couple of different things, just some of the words seem a little bit off, you seem to be using too many words like "then" or something of those sorts. Basically almost like your typing a paper, your telling a story, it should flow a bit better, Like you can make it like "Throwing the cup of tea away as he grunted loudly, looking up toward the mountain as he started sprinting toward it." Stuff like that just to make it flow better. Also you can describe how he is feeling, and also what the smell around where he is, is it mid summer, as in hot, or mid winter as in really cold?)

The blowing breeze was the sign that something was coming, a man running along the the branches of the trees, light as a feather not breaking even the tiniest of branches as he did so. He wore a outfit, a black shinigami kimono that stood out against the trees. His breath weas calm, this was a normal day for him, just scouting along seeing if there was any hollow that were around. Mountains lately seemed to have a hot spot for them, and being in the gotei 13, he needed to eradicate any and all hollow spirits that were around.

"Man i do hate patrols." He stated as he slowed down to a stop on a tree branch, just seeming to be light as a feather the thing was that he was actually controlling the very aspect of the wind that was around his feet, making it so that it seemed he was basically floating on nothing, his air was down his back as he looked ahead toward the mountains, a x shaped scar on the side of his face, and down toward his side there was a sword strapped to a belt, this was his Zanpakutou. He was a, Soul Reaper.

He felt something on the back of his neck, his hair stood up a little bit as he turned sharply off to the left, he felt a spiritual pressure, a very small one. With the hint of a . . Hollow. Quickly he turned in it's direction and took off, with a light stride at first then almost with a burst of energy he was moving with the wind, making sure the wind resistance in front of him was close to nothing. Jumping into the air, flipping backward he then landed in a small clearing with, enough room to build a house on it, and three trees.

Looking up toward the trees he saw a small man that was laying down, having a peaceful nap. For a couple of seconds he looked around, not seeing any sign of a hollow anymore, he moved toward the man, with a quick jump he had flash stepped on top of the tree and looked down toward this man that was sleeping.

"Would you mind me asking what you are doing?" He asked the sleeping man.

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The man woke up with a frown what the hell does this guy think he is doing. he thought with some temper. As he sighed he sat up, he looked at the guy with a wondering/grumpy face. ''Who the hell are you suppose to be?'' he asked with a hard voice. He rubbed his hands through his hair with disappointment, he really wanted to sleep on this wonderful day. When he finally woke up from his tired mind, he noticed the guy was wearing shinigami clothing. Hmmm of course, a shinigami. he thought to himself. The man stood up and looked at the guy, ''So, a shinigami? Why are you here?'' he asked. Then put his hands in his pockets while slightly touching the hilt of his zanpakutou.

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.:Kenshin:.

Insolent! Kenshin, let me deal with this person. Please. Came his Zanpakutou spirit talking to him, appearing right next to him in human form instead of the dragon form looking over at the man that was now standing there with his hand on his hilt.

"Lower your Guard. Or i will have a Vizard for dinner." His Zanpakutou spirit was talking out loud, usually this would never happen, but he was Kenshin's protector now, Kenshin's teacher and he cared much about him, as did Kenshin. Walking forward a little bit, Kenshin had appeared next to him, pushing him back a little bit.

"If i need you, Dalinda, i will call for you, if you would please i would like to see what this guy will do." He stated as the spirit had transformed into a dragon form and then disappeared into the wind that was surrounding them slowly. "What is your name, young one?" Came the cool calm tone of Kenshin Yuudai. "I guess asking someone's elses name before stating your own is a bit wrong, pardon me, i am Kenshin Yuudai." He told him.

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''The names Randal.'' he says while putting a thumb up in the air. ''I am a Vizard and proud of it'' he says with a wink. Then he senses Kenshin's spiritual pressure and then stiffens. ''Hmm...I assume you're a shinigami.'' he says with a groan. Then he looks at the sky noticing how long he had slept and then looks down at himself. Starting to freak out, he sees dirt all over him and wipes it off quickly. UGH! my first impression and im all messy! Then once all the dirt was wiped off, Randal grinned in embarrassment as he blushed. Assuming his guest had been busy, ''Why don't we have some tea. You seem like you just got done with whatever you were doing.'' he offers Kenshin. Then he pulls out a pack of tea, a container of water, and two cups. As he dropped all the supplies on the ground in the right place, he dropped down to the ground cross-legged and started to make the tea.

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